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Post by RayanStiger on Jul 27, 2005 10:59:10 GMT -5
Steph you are awesome! That's the same pic Alan put up, but with glowing swords and sparkly star background! coooooooooooooool...
Yeah David if you want to get in this story at all, you'd darned better tell me what you want your navi to be like. And his name can't be Shadowman because that's already a Mega Man navi name. Tho he can still be a ninja for all I care...
Sheesh, Harle, 7 mistakes and you try to poke fun at me. Thanks a lot! XP Naw, I know there's some stuff in there I gotta change. Actually I'd appreciate it if you'd PM me what those errors were so I can change them. Some of them may be what I was already going to change, but others may have slipped past my attention.
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Post by Harle on Jul 28, 2005 1:25:32 GMT -5
Heh, okkie. Still, I tell you because I care, and because I saw them. ^o^ Not biggie though. And I shall PM you... I think before I leave.
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Post by Gai on Jul 29, 2005 0:13:01 GMT -5
I know I know. So I just sent you all the info but if there's anything else, let me know so I can give it to you.
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Post by RayanStiger on Jul 29, 2005 23:09:33 GMT -5
Okay, partial ch 2 update. Fixed some stuff with Valest as well as syntax errors pointed out by Harle. One of which I found that she missed >u<. Yeah take that miss "I can count your errors" person! ^_^ hehe. Uh yeah but Ky infected me with laziness, so I don't feel like completely changing the stuff with the Prism and such right now. I'll get to it... when I feel like it...
Sniff... I'm going away! For 10 days! NOoooooooooooooooooooooooooo... >.< I'll miss you all! Especially those of you that are cute girls. Err, I mean, I'll miss all of you. Yeah.
Anyways, I'll hopefully have ch 3 done by the time I return. Will have limited internet access until I get back. So don't expect to see much of me for awhile.
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Post by RayanStiger on Aug 5, 2005 13:29:58 GMT -5
Well... here I am, up in NY... Been working on ch 3. I doubt I'll have it completely finished by the time I get back, but it should be mostly done. I hope. Gonna need to do much editing on it... Anyways, I miss everybody and I can't wait to come back, which should be around Monday or Tuesday. Ciao!
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Well, I'm back. I'm sorry to say that I'm not done with ch 3 yet. No, I haven't been slacking off, I've been working very hard on it. There are many reasons I'm not done yet. I'll spare you the details until later. Nobody likes hearing excuses.
Also, I have edited ch 1 and 2 again, completely. No, not final edit, just complete skim throughs with deletings and changings and the like. More explanations on this later.
Now I'm off to see if anybody besides Aileen read my story on fanfiction.com...
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Post by RayanStiger on Aug 27, 2005 13:38:04 GMT -5
I'm sorry everybody...... still not done. Yes, I know. I ought to be by now. It's at least not all my fault... so many days were wasted due to vacation and the retreat I went to. Nothing I could do about the latter, and the former I worked hard on ch 3 but hit so many road blocks... I'm finally starting to get ideas for what I want to do in this chapter. Sure took me long enough. It's difficult pacing this chapter; it's the beginning of giving the story some forward motion, but yet I don't want to rush through and skip over the character interaction. That wouldn't be very enjoyable.
Anyways, there are plenty of reasons I'm still not done. But instead of listing my excuses, I'm going to work on it. Right now, actually. Thank you all so much for your patience. Hopefully you'll feel the worth of waiting it out when you actually get to read the finished chapter.
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