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Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 30, 2004 13:35:53 GMT -5
IN case anybody was wonderin.
Alans is in a very bad Writers Block now...
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Post by Taylor on Apr 30, 2004 19:00:57 GMT -5
Take your time but not TOO much.
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Aldora
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Where there is Light, there is Darkness. Darkness and Light are the two halves of one.
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Post by Aldora on May 1, 2004 18:15:22 GMT -5
Yea.. don't take too long. *rubs temples* Oww... headache coming up. I wouldn't mind if you updated after AP exams. gah! My AP bio teacher is insane!!!!!
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Post by RayanStiger on May 2, 2004 15:10:49 GMT -5
Dang it...Rayan hasn't gotten to blast anybody yet... and currently Aoshi's sword skills are lacking. But Riku! Yeah rock on!
Laa de dooooo I finished part of my chapter for the other fan fic! Yay! so much more to write though...
And man Jake is totally friggin creepy...
"I WILL MARRY A ROBOT!!!" ...Yeah I'm still wondering how...that would...work...out...Oi Vey... >.<;;
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Post by KuraiGekkou on May 3, 2004 8:04:26 GMT -5
yes i have already begun reading the begining it and i very envy your very skill of describing every possible detail. I would of just said screw the Kids right now. But you added the Kids.
YOU BROUGHT THE KIDS BACK! of course i only read about 3 sentence now. but i wouldnt have thought of the kids. this is the advantage of two people writing. but yeah. Guy marrying robot. what the heck
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Post by RayanStiger on May 3, 2004 19:24:00 GMT -5
Thank you Alan. It took me awhile to write all that while keeping all the characters IN character, if you know what I mean. It took some work 'perfecting' Mattus. And the next part will be about Kurai with some deep plot stuff. Yays.
Yeah like I said, Jake kinda freaks me out...I knew he would be odd, considering he was making out with a robot...>.<;; oh well it's all good...er or not...
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Post by Taylor on May 3, 2004 23:31:08 GMT -5
I still can't believe Rene's a robot. Must be denial? Nah. Just wierd.
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Post by KuraiGekkou on May 29, 2004 13:23:47 GMT -5
OK yeah.. i need an inspiration. Im ready to write after some time now final exams are coming writing is going to be mai stress relief. inspire me somone...
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Post by Taylor on May 30, 2004 0:18:22 GMT -5
Only inspiration I got is not very good stuff. Uhh, spongebob? Funniness. Hmm Rene hasn't slaped anyone yet, or called them names.
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Post by RayanStiger on Jun 9, 2004 19:43:35 GMT -5
No, no...spongebob does not inspire writers! Maybe movie people or some other people, but writers need something different. Okay...I sense...you need music. Much music. Earthbound has been powering me of late... Also, store up your battle rage and unleash it outside, and then go back in and write. Believe me, though that sounds really weird, it has helped me so many times. Slash at stuff, or nothing at all. Even better, spar with someone... I did with David this weekend, and man, did that get me wired... Concentrate all your thoughts on one thing at a time, and pour everything you have into it. That's just for general inspiration...
Specifics for this fanfic, I'd say...well try fighting games. Or rpgs. That is all I can sense as of now... try those and see if they help. There are many ways to gain inspiration. I personally have been thinking only about Fire Emblem and Earthbound for like the past week, and I've been storing up battle rage for that long...tomorrow, when all my finals are done, I'm gonna go crazy and write like mad.
If you don't understand my 'inspiration,' either it's cuz ur not a writer, or my inspiration triggers are different than yours...either way, just look for something that will trigger emotions or thoughts inside you that you can focus into one thing, the thing at hand being writing. Good luck...
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Post by Taylor on Jun 10, 2004 20:55:33 GMT -5
I dont even like spongebob, Mrs. Jones had us watch it in class though cus it was about writing a paper in the episode. For now he's been living in Ragnarok.
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Post by RayanStiger on Jun 10, 2004 21:48:20 GMT -5
no flippin' duh...that's ALL Alan ever does...sheez. I've at least been writing since school let out... and yes I hate spongebob. He must die... somebody give him electrotherepy...underwater! Mua, ha haaaa!!!
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Post by Taylor on Jun 13, 2004 22:55:58 GMT -5
::taps fingers::
Writing?
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Post by KuraiGekkou on Jun 20, 2004 17:57:57 GMT -5
Im only finishing mai fanfics cause I want to prove to DP and Rene that i am not completely obbsesed on Ragnarok. Mai true purpose when I was joining Ragnarok was to have a place where everyone who enjoyed Rping a more advance sorta of playing area. Maybe limiting a few of their options but still, I wanted to make something like… an advance world of Ria. Unfroutantly I was dragged into Ragnarok’s Competing like enviroment and became addicted to it. And now that I think about it. I have basically competed mai life on Ragnarok. I have made a monk, got the romantic gent, and made lots of new friends. It was a wonderful experience. If I was to continue to play RO it would be the reason just so I can enjoy it with Matt, Rene, And anybody else who could join me on a wonderfully beautiful world of RO. And try to get a kitty headband XD. This does not mean. Im deleting RO however. Cause RO is a lil piece of Paradise I dunt want to quite give up yet. I may come back to it. You know those days when your like. The boards are dead. Half life I beaten. Everyone else is dead in the world. Lets play RO for a while. RO’s Music beautiful btw. There. Im done with mai ranting. Shall we move onto where we left off? Almost forgotten one more thing. Why I am not rping nemore. The only reaon I dunt rp nemore. Is that I suck at reading. Yes you heard me. I SUCK at reading and writing. I cannot keep up with Rps nemore. Which is why I have moved onto Writing fanfics. Hey. Its something I can do right?
((sorry if this dosent quite match up where I left off. I have quite forgotten what I was writing…))
Aoshi groaned as he rubbed the side of his ribs. “damn…” he then squeezes his eyes shut from pain. Kari quickly got off Aoshi and apologized at least 15 times. “Aoshi! I am so sorry! Are you ok?!” Jake who was standing on the platform above them wiped off his tears and breathed heavily back hunched. “heh… isn’t it amazing? Mai Strength Kari?” his voice was raspy and had a sense of chaos in it. He then ripped off part of his shirt to reveal that his arm was not made of flesh. But by mechanical parts. Toadess looked at it and then turned to Kurai. “Kurai!! This man… he sacrificed his own body for strength…” Kurai didnt respond in any way to Toadess's cries. Aoshi then attempted to stand up his eyes locked onto Jakes's angrily. “Sacrificing your own body that god has given you. Your sad and pitful…” Jake Returned Aoshi's stare angrily and without a word made a waving motion with his arm which caused Rene to leap twoards Aoshi. Kari seeing Rene was trying to crush Aoshi’s body quickly Shoved Aoshi to the side and drawed her sword. She then chanted something under her breath and then a strange ki aura surrounded her. It was a strange sort of bubble around Kari translucent with a tint of blue.
Rene continued towards Kari despite of the change of target her gravity accelerating her fall. Kari's eyes stared straight into Rene without any fear. Right before contact Kari leaped to the side causing Rene to crash into the ground kicking up a huge cloud of dust. This blurred the vision of everyone else. They could only then hear Kari’s Blade crashing with Renes Robotic body and Thuds of Kari’s flesh being punched about. Then a bright light lighted up (wow... that sounded so stupid) the dust. “The plasma cannon…” Rayan said as he started to take over the body both Aoshi and him Live off. The cannon fired and the clouds parted away from Kari and Rene. Kari blocked the beam with her sword held in front with both hands. But the force of the beam continuously pushed her back along the ground. Kari struggled to defend herself.
Meanwhile on the side of the battle Toadess just then relized Kurai’s dazed state. “Kurai! Wake up!” She started to wave a hand in front of Kurai. “Kari’s in danger aren’t you going to help her? well maybe not...” Kurai’s body then just gavea voilent shudder. “i… Rene’s… Soul… was erased? By technology…? Its not possible..” Kurai said softly to Toadess. “But then that… can’t be Rene we are fighting then… can it?” Toadess raised an eyebrow and then concernly asked him. "Kurai.. are.. you ok?"
Kari Screamed as the blast overcame her blade and she fell backwards onto the ground. Her blade was glowing red from the heat of the beam. Rene lowered her arm emotionless with smoke coming out from the center of her hand. Jake smirked evilly at Kari. “this is quite amazing… The powerful Priestess Kari shall fall to the hands of Technology. Dieing not by the power of devils or demons. But by the cold steel of Robots.” he then appluaded himself. And as he spoke. Rene said it sychonized with him. After Jakes speech Rene Made the same evil smirk. “Can the gods save you now Kari, Punished angel?” Rene said with an evil tone that would never sound like Rene herself. Kari stood up without any moment of waste and put on an angered look. “Mai power will come from the love of god, and faith is what gives me the fearless courage. Of course the gods will save me from any danger.” Jake laughed. “suit yourself.” Rene’s body then inhumanly twisted about and then her body flung towards Kari without any form. Kari not being able to predict the move was hit hard from Rene’s body. Rene then twisted about to reach into a pinning position on top of Kari. Kari yelped from the pain and as she was about to kick Rene off Rene lowered her palm straight at Kari’s face, Warning her she could blow her head off any second. “KARI!” Rayan yelled as he quickly struggled to his feet holding his rib. Kurai’s eyes widened, Mint buried her head into Toadess’s Body and Toadess held her mouth.
Jake leaned against a nearby rail from his platform. “im waiting for the gods to rescue you now.” He said laughing. Kari put on a solid face. “mai faith for god will not die…” Jake sighed. “Such a stubborn gurl you are Kari… Your loss!” he then flicked his fingers and that familiar plasma glow begun to power up in Rene’s hand. Toadess seeing that neither Rayan or Kurai was in condition to help she matarilized a golden sword from the air. Jake seeing Toadess’s intentions shook his finger. “noo noo bad gurl. If you were to move an inch towards Kari I am afraid I will have to blast her head off more quickly then.” Toadess gulped and relized she couldn’t save Kari that way. Toadess groaned and then whispered a curse word at Jake.
Suddenly a child scream came from the sky. Everybody looked up and there came Riku pummelting down towards Rene and Kari firing rapidly at Rene, missing horribly. Rene reacted and fired upwards at Riku 3 times. The first 2 missed but the 3rd one knicked Rikus shoulder which threw Riku’s mid air balance off. He started to twist sideways into a dizzy dance in the sky. Riku yelped in pain as he lost his gun. It fell near Rayan who quickly seized the opportunity by grabbing the gun. Enduring the pain on his ribs he rolled in front of Rene and fired. Rene was hit backwards but in mid air flipped upwards and landed away from the Rayan’s family. Rayan then let out his arms and caught Riku quite calmly. Kari wrapped an arm around Rayan to help herself up. Rayan then turned his gaze from Riku straight into Jake's. His eyes whispered to Jake. "We will not loose."
Riku was breathing quickly and started to close his eyes. He wasn’t hurt badly but the wound on his shoulder gave him a lot of shock. Kari started to soothe Riku. Rayan looked at Kari as his eyes started to do that weird switching thing. Aoshi Spoke. “stop that Kari. He needs to learn to deal with his first injury in battle, like a man." With that Aoshi tossed Riku onto the ground expecting him to be ready for it. Riku hit the ground like a bag of bricks. Aoshi disguistingly turned away from him and kneeled onto the ground grabbing his side. Kari not too cool with the idea of this frowned and then went to Riku’s side.
Kurai looking at the whole scene of Riku and Aoshi grinded his teeth and then turned to Jake. He stared down at Jake. “Hey. Punk.” He yelled out to him. “How can you call that Thing Rene if you changed her memory?” Jake looked at him from the side of his eye. “What do you mean its not Rene!? Of course its Rene. Look at the exact body structre. It’s the same soul!” Kurai grinned. “But you tampered with it. Dosent that make Jake’s Rene then? Not the Rene that loves you?” Kurai said with a small smile. Jake frowned angrily but started to make a confused growl. “I dun’t know what your talking about… Rene has and always will love me. As much as I love her too… Shes here.. that’s here. THAT IS RENE!” Jake rubbed his head angrily. “YOUR JUST TRYING TO RUIN MAI LIFE! YOUR JUST RUINING IT!” Jake apparently very angry with Kurai moved his arm again and Rene with no warning changed targets from Aoshi’s family to Kurai, Firing a shower of plasma at him. Kurai wings ripped out of his shirt and he took flight into the air. Rene stopped firing and then fired one huge shot extremely off target. But it landed exactly where Kurai was going to. A huge explosion blew Kurai out of the sky and filled the room in a red light. Toadess screamed and Mint just grabbed tighter onto Toadess. Aoshi Ran towards Kurai trying to catch him. But Kurai recovering in mid air suspended himself in the air rubbing his head. “crap.. that’s not fair! That one followed me!” Jake laughed. “no it didn’t Kurai. I predicted your moves easily with the power of technology. I spent years studying your battles caught on tape just for this moment.” Kurai eyes widened. “mai gosh what the hell is wrong with you?!” Jake just laughed and signaled Rene to fire another shower of Plasma at Kurai.
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LadyDarkness
Where there is Light, there is Darkness. Darkness and Light are the two halves of one.
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Post by Aldora on Jun 20, 2004 18:10:45 GMT -5
yay! kurai updated the fic! It's really really good! *dizzyness* It's so hot today...
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