|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 18, 2004 23:58:18 GMT -5
Project Kuro-Rene Chapter 1
((Edit: Changed Taylor To Toadess. For Taylor and Rene are actually the same person Sorry Rene ^^;; ))
Kurai ran quickly carrying a fainted Toadess in his arms. Explosives where being set off everywhere around them as he ran through a small man made tunnel. Wires crackled and the sense of tension was everywhere.
"Rayan we won't make it out alive! i swear! he said there was at least 500 explosives ACK!!" He yelled to Rayan who was next to him. A great explosion above his head went off. Rayan ran at a slightly slower speed then Kurai but was constantly shooting behind both of them.
"Dang it Kurai don't stay stuff like that! we are just fine!!" Rayan yelled up to Kurai. Mint was next behind them encouraging Rene to run faster. "Hurry up Rene! We you gotta run faster!" Mint was a human now (due to some extra complicated plot i dunt feel like explaining now) and was at least 15 years old. Rene yelped and held her hands above her head.
"This is not good!!" She yelled out to everyone. Her shoes tapped quickly along the ground as more electricity crackled about. Right behind her was a hoarde of mutated monsters runnign after all of them like dogs. their skin seemed to be unstable and was leaking out a strange redish greenish liquid. Along with deformed bones that ripped through the skin with spikes. Rayan shot furiously at them. But sundely a shot missed and shot Rene at the foot. Rene screamed as she toppled downwards onto the ground. Mint screamed along with her and ran to her side. Kurai hearing her scream turned around to see them stopping.
"MINT, RENE!!" And with that he ran back twoards them throwing Toadess into Rayans arms. Rayan barely catching her Laid her on the ground Quickly and took out two different guns and shot at the creatures being more carful this time. The creatures ran quickly and one dug its teeth into Mints leg. Mint screamed and shook the creature off quickly. an Explosion set off near them and blew up the creature, guts flying onto Rene and Mint. each moment tensed up as Rene tried to stand up and Mint helping her up. Kurai then spotted something more frightning. The last explosion caused a beam nearby the gurls to crumble. it then begun to tip over twoards them. Kurai's eyes shrunk in fear and he yelled out to them.
"MINT RENE! OUT OF THE WAY!!!" before either could move another explosion set off underneathe the gurls and both of them sepreated. even though another explisoin set off the beam continued to fall threatning to crush both gurls. Kurai seeing he had to choose between Rene and Mint hesitated and stood there for a split second but then Quickly leaped twoards Mint and Slid along the smooth tunnel ground and caught Mint in his arms and then Leaped off the falling beam. Rene Yelled in blood filled screams as The creatures ripped a limb off her. Mint covered her eyes and Rayan ceased firing due to the frightning image. and then the beam fell. On Rene and the creatures that was devouring her with no sign of possible survival. Kurai looked behind him and closed his eyes whispering a very hate-filled
"damn.." but continued to run. Kurai then whapped Rayan on the head as he ran past him going twoards the exit. rayan came back to his senses and carried Toadess right behind him.
3 years later
"Happy B-day Mint!" Kurai said smiling presenting a very beatiful cake. Mint smiled happifuly clasping her hands together. But she then made a serious face and turned to Kurai.
"You didnt steal this did you like you promised Daddy?" Mint said looking into her fathers eyes. Kurai laughed and then placed his hands on his hips.
"No of course not dear. I wouldn't break a promise with mai dear daughter would i?" Kurai said leaning twoards her and rubbing her hair. Mint smiled and then asked
"Then how did you get it?" Kurai laughed and then said
"Belive it or not it was your mother's creation." Kurai said pointing twoards an elfen gurl wearing an aporn as she entered the room. Mint smiled and again clasped her hands together. "Really Mom did you really make this!? thats amazing!" . The Elfen gurl blushed and laughed. "Yes hehe. Its an old recipe to elves. Very hard to make and only with the finest and sweetest ingredients. Just what mai sweet daughter deserves on her 18th b-day!" She smiled as she snapped her fingers quite young like. Kurai walked over to her and pecked her on the cheeck. "Hmm that was rather sweet of you to say Toadess. Not normaly what you would say you know?" he said teasiingly. Toadess twitched an eyebrow and pushed Kurai away. "Oh stop that..." Mint then made a quite sad face as she stared at the cake. "I only regret that none of mai friends werent able to make it though...". Kurai and toadess then looked at each other and grinned. "Eh? really Mint?" And then suddenly kids from behind various house objects leaped up and yelled out.
"SUPRISE!!!!" Mint so suprised leaped out of her seat and held her chest. she then started to cry a lil bit and then ran over to hug her dad and Mom. "WOW you shouldn't have!! I love you Mom and Dad!" Kurai blushed and Toadess slyly looked at Kurai.
---------------------------------------------------
"Riku... thank you so much for taking me out for a walk this night." Mint said as she was walking to a lil younger boy then him wearing a black leather jacket and having long blue hair with sunglasses. Riku was the son of Kari and Rayan. he wears a headband that was labeled Stiger (co) the name of his fathers company. He was a much more mature looking man for his age. He smiled back at Mint and held her close to him. "Hey anything for mai gurl who just turned into that age. Im suprised that your Dad let take you out after your birthday party." he said. Mint blushed and leaned into him. They both were walking under a blanket of stars (oh how romantic is that ^^? ) and a quite nippy autumn nite. "It took some convincing but with the help of a rare achohol bottle mai dad said yes ^^ " they both coninued to walk until they got to a bench. Both of them sat down and Mint sighed and nuzzled against Riku. Riku (with the help of his fathers genes blushed ) Mint whispered to Riku. "I think this is what everyone means when they say i want to stay like this forever..." Riku smiled and looked down at Mint who rested against his shoulder. " uhh... yeah..." He said quite stupidly. Mint Giggled. "Not too poetic are you Riku?". Riku then chuckled too and then said. "well Mint.. uhh your red hair is as beatiful as a pool.. of... Blood?" Mint then couldnt stop laughing after that. "hehe.. Your so funny Riku! I love the way you are right are." She then Leaned upwards and leaned over to signal she wanted Kiss him. Riku closed his eyes slowly and leaned forward blushing quite massively. unfourtantly he eneded up kissing her nose. Mint opeend her eyes and sweatdropped and Riku jerked back embarresed.
|
|
|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 18, 2004 23:58:55 GMT -5
"Ack! im sorry Mint! But how am i suppose to know where your lips are with mai eyes closed!?" Mint a bit upset crossed her arms and sat upright looking off to the other side. "Hmph! how embarresing..." she said dissapointed. Riku sweatdropped and then suddenly tensed up... "Umm Mint? Look over there..." He said pointing in front of them. Mint didnt turn. "Oh no Riku im not falling for that. You blew your chance for kissing me." But Riku insisted. "No Mint im serious somones looking at us straight at us... and ack.. its freaky..." Riku said a lil bit studdereing. Mint then turned finallly and then let out a lil shriek. In front of them stood a shadowy female figure with long brown hair. Every part of her looked normal but her eyes glew a strange yellowish colour in the dark. Riku yelled out to the lady.
"Can i help you mam?" the women didnt answer and stood exactly still. Riku grabbed Mints hand and stood up. "come on Mint lets get out of here..." and at that second as Mint stood up a sharp rock bursted out the ground right in front of Mint and Riku sepreating the two. MInt toppled onto the ground as debris felled around her. Riku backflipped away from the sharp rock and stared at the lady. The lady had her hand outward and her hair was shot back and slowly floating back.
Riku grabbed two guns from his jacket and pointed it at the lady as he ran twoards Mint. "YOu! What do you think your doing?!" He yelled at the lady. The lady didnt answer but instead moved her hand twoards Riku. Riku trembled and scooted a bit backwards worried of an attack. Suddenly a green blast flew from The ladys hand with a humming sound twoards Riku at a frigting speed. Riku yelped and was hit straight in the chest thrown over the bench and into some bushes behind him. Mint frightened yelled out "RIKU!" Mint then stared angrily at the lady who was now walking twoards her. Mint gulped and got into one of his father's stances called the Devils Dance. The lady continued walking at a constant but quite slow speed. Mint not waiting for her to complete coming twoards her leaped up into the air and threw her foot into the ladys soft cheek. It made contanct and the lady toppled sideways. The lady gave a soft growl as her brown hair whipped about from the force. Mint smiled and yelled out.
"Yatta! Take that!" The lady from her crouched stance rushed forward twoards Mint with a fist blurring into Mint's gut. Mint reciveing the great shock of the fist was lifted upwards slowly and forced to spit out blood and then toppled flat onto the ground knocked out. The lady stood above Mint with a quite evil smile. She then opened her hand right in front of Mint threatning to release another one of her blast. Riku just then leaped out of the bushes with a quite large gun.
"B*tch! dunt you dare touch her!" But before he could even aim at the lady she somehow sorta smoothly slid across the ground and elbowed swiftly into Rikus face. Rikus upper body shot backwards and his nose started to bleed, he let out a yelp. Before his body could fall to the ground the lady then Grabbed his face and threw him onto the bench breaking it and his body tumbled ontop of the pieces and the ground. Mint who was just waking up gasped and then started to run twoards Riku. But the lady grabbed Mints neck liftimng her up. Mint Chocked and started to struggle out kicking her feet about. The lady's smile became more pyschotic as she stared into Mint's eyes she then said in a slow but strange demonic voice. "Kill Kurai's Love one. Revenge for killing mines. Kill Kurai's Love one. Revenge for killing mines." and she continued to repeat it as her hands started to glow red. Suddenly a figure Blurred twoards The lady whamming into her body with both hands outwards. this caused her to loose her grip and Mint fell to the ground gasping for air. The new figure connected his push by kicking the lady into the air and then leaping into the air next to her punched her twice then flipping over and kicking her twoards the ground, then landning on her with his knees. Her body twitched from impace and when the newcomer Was sure she didnt move anymore he stood up. Mint recognizing the figure yelled out angrily.
"DAD! You promised to let me and Riku go alone!" Kurai smirked and shrugged. "Hey i couldnt let you go out i mean look what just happened here!" He said poitning to the lady who just started to get up again. Mint yelled frightened as she looked at the lady get up. "DAD! Watch out!" Kurai turned fist ready to contact into her face. But as he turned the light from a nearby lamp revleaed her face. Kurai froze and his eyes shot open. "Re---Rene??" He whispered in a shocked voice. rene answered with a powerful punch that caused Kurai to fall backwards and Rene to lean forward almost loosing her balance. She then Spoke with the strange voice again.
"it was your fault Kurai.. You caused her to die. I saw it. YOu caused it! And now you will pay for it...." Kurai leaped back to his feet and then swung his foot at Rene. "I have no idea what your talking about!" his foot was caught by Renes hand easily. Kurai gasped. the real Rene would never have been this good at physical combat! this must.. not be her... he thought as he struggled to get out. Rene lifted Kurai up by his caught foot and slammed him back into the ground. Kurai gasped and coughed. a small dent in the ground was caused from the attack. Kurai then swung his foot threatning to sweep attack Rene to loose her balance. Rene was caught off guard and fell to the floor. Kurai taking advantage of that Pinned her down by rolling onto her using his knee and then lifted both hands in the air threatning to smash her skull. Rene couldnt get out but had both hands available and grabbed Kurai's neck with them. Kurai couldnt move any closer or else he would be risking his circulation to be cut off enteirly. so he stayed there with his arms in the air. But slowly he was already loosing air. Kurai made a few grunting sounds as he struggled to hold his breath. Rene smiled relizing the hopless situation he was in.
"Kurai... Isnt this sad? but i won't kill you until i kill Mint in front of you. So you will know how it feels like loosing somone you love.." Kurai eyes opeened with anger. Suddenly a charging up sound was heard. Kurai turned his heads twoards it along with Rene. Riku leaned against a large mounted gun aiming twoards them. "Kurai Move!!!" he yelled out. Kurai smirked and then smiled at Rene. "I know your not rene. But right now your Hopless..." Kurai then leaped off rene Unpinning her. And the mounted gun fired at Rene with a large Blinding Blue beam that filled the park with a blue glow. While it continued to fire Kurai picked up Riku and Mint and ran off back home.
"Come on lets get out of here! i dunt like this place too much..." And he leaped away. The gun continued to fire at its tagert until another beam blew up the cannon. Rene was there in front of the cannon her clothes burnt and her hair was half on fire. her arm was extended showing that she threw that beam to blow up the gun. She then shook her hair until the fire went out. her body was evidently weak now as she fainted backwards. A man behind her caught her before she fell. The man was tall with Long black hair. he was wearing a tight coat. Rene with her eyes closed whispered to him in a different voice other then the one she was tlaking with earlier. "Jake.. i couldn't kill her... and i can't...". Jake sat down setting Rene's head in his lap. "Its ok Rene..." He said in a soft voice as he brushed back her burnt hair trying to clean it. "they will die for what they done to you... And i promise that.."
|
|
Aldora
Infantry
LadyDarkness
Where there is Light, there is Darkness. Darkness and Light are the two halves of one.
Posts: 105
|
Post by Aldora on Apr 19, 2004 0:11:59 GMT -5
sweet! You're the best at writing fanfics... Hm...seems like Riku didn't inherit any genes of Kari.
|
|
|
Post by Taylor on Apr 19, 2004 0:25:00 GMT -5
SO GIDDY! A STORY OF MINE OWN. but...i'm like possesed.
NOW! MORE! I COMMAND YOU! please? :: puppy eyes::
|
|
|
Post by FlamingMoogles on Apr 19, 2004 0:44:18 GMT -5
who the crap is the jake guy who just walks in at the end?
|
|
|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 19, 2004 22:41:23 GMT -5
Cliff hanger baka. Now you will learn who Jake is. ((note to self SuperStar DDR mix is a great way to start Fanfics))
Kuro-Rene Chapter 2
By, Alan
"Rene alive!?" Rayan said looking at Kurai with complete suprise. "but thats not possible... we both saw her died..." Rayan said placing a hand on his chin remembering the time back at the exploding tunnel. Kurai nodded his head and placed his tea on the tabletop. Rayan carried the teachest and brushed his half black and blue hair back. his eyes was serious and azn like and a freakly black around but blue in the center. Aoshi and Rayan was fused together in order for Aoshi to be completely forgiven his sins as Satan's Son. Rayan sacrificed his pure body for he loved Kari and knew this meant a lot to her. Now Rayan had the skills of a swordsman and the knowledge and tactics of a military master. He carries Aoshi's treasured Tea chest all around him but can not touch his blade unless Aoshi's soul completly takes control of the body, and Aoshi can never touch firearms unless Rayan takes control of the body. Until the two can find Nirvana of both souls they can wield both weapons. (whoa complete new story just right here O.o;; )
"Yes but we never found her body did we? so what if..." Kurai rubbed his head wound. "Nahh i mean that can't be her.. she's not much of a fighter as i remembered.." Kurai chuckled a bit. Rayan didn't say anything but narrowed his eyes. "Kari.. Didn't Rene say once to you about a lover who was a very intelligent and succesful scientest in varoius fields?" Kari who was just pouring tea into his cup blinked and scratched her head. "why.. yes.. now that you meantion it..." She sat down and fixed Riku's wounds who was next to her. Rayan's eyes sorta flipped (gosh that must be freaky..) and his eyes filled with a black inky colour completely. A stern voice filled Rayans voice. "... What is his name?" he was Now Aoshi. Kari a bit shocked from the sudden change in his voice made a quick gasp. Kurai just raised an eyebrow and Mint woke up from a half-sleepen state. Kari struggled to remember. "I'm sorry but i dunt remember..." she said a bit ashamed not being able to fufill Aoshi's Request. Aoshi eyes narrowed and gritted his teeth. Rayan: "Aoshi you must remember not too get too easily upset like that..." Aoshi looked up at his astral and soul partner and made a slow grin: "Sorry about that Rayan... i am not one who is used to patience."
"however honey (ugg i think Kari is too serious to say pet names like that... dosent sound right when i type that... ) i do remember a major project he worked for. " Kari said rubbing his Aoshi's Shoulder fearing he was getting upset. Aoshi's eyes opened up and she turned to Kari. Aoshi turned and his facial expression asked. "really?" Kari nodded smiling. "It was easy to remember it was something like Human Karma project. I belive it dealt in study of Human soul study and Devils after the Shinigami wars..." Kari said rubbing her chin.
An Akward Silence.
Kurai spit out his tea. Aoshi nodded his head. And Kari held a hand over her mouth and whispered. "oh, my.." Mint fainted and Riku raised an eyebrow. (apparently his fathers gene didnt help much when it came to common sense)
-----------------------------------------
Rene laid on a sort of lab table with a big mechinacal device above her. She had her eyes closed. Jake was pressing a bunch of buttons from various computers that filled the vast lab room that they both stood in. his Lab coat swished about as he went here to there pressing many buttons. His rectangular small glasses glistned in the strong lab lights. Rene under a beam of light wore a simple White .. thingy.. dress... (i dunno what gurl outfits are called.. but just picture Chi outfit in the 1st manga cover. ) A giant machine hummed and a blast of green light from the mechinical device above Rene fired directly into Rene's body. Jake turned to look at Rene the green light flashing concstantly and filling the lab room with a eerie glow. the machine hum went louder until it went to a point where it just sorta cut itself off from its power. Rene's eyes opened and she slowly turned to face Jake with tired eyes.
"Jake?" She said in a normal voice everyone recognized as Rene. Jake smiled softly. "Im here Rene..." Jake said as he leaned to face Rene. Rene reached out her hand and smiled. "I missed you..." She said softly. Jake reached out to her hand and kissed it softly. "probably not as much as i missed you Rene." Jake said with a smirk. With a lil tug Rene sat upstraight on the lab table. Jake walked around her and smiled with content. "I designed you perfectly just the way you were before." Jake said reaching for a bunch of pictures in his coat pocket. He then handed it to Rene who reached for them curiously. Rene looked at them each with interest. All of them were pictures of both of them together 3 or more years ago. Rene then held them to her chest. "I miss... these days..." She then made a lil gasp. "Jake!!" She said with alertness and turned to Jake. Jake with much concern yelled back. "What is it Rene!? did i do something wrong!?" And he rushed over to Rene. Rene rubbed her face and with a bit embarresment said. "I--i---i Can't cry..." She continued as she rubbed her face. Jake scooted back a bit reliefed and laughed. "Haha of course not. I wouldn't want your body to display such painful emotion would i?" Rene smiled slowly and giggled. "well.. i guess not..." Jake then quickly grabbed Rene's hand and let her fall into his arms. Rene made a suprised gasp. Jake smiled took off his glasses and looked into Rene's eyes. "Let us finished where we left off before shall we?" Jake said before he leaned over and kissed her. his long hair covered both Rene and his face. after the embrace Rene smiled but then made a slow frown.
"... but... it just dosent seem too right playing around with death Jake... i shouldn't exist right now... i mean aren't you bending destiny's decision?"Rene said holding onto Jakes Shoulder as Jake turns her upright. Jake smiled and brushed back Rene's hair. "Is it wrong to bring back a loved one who derserves to live longer to experience happinese others have? or deaserve the love of another man's devotion to a lady?" Jake said as he slowly twirled her about with one hand. Rene followed the twirl slowly giggling. Rene then Smiled but then leaned forward twoards him brignign a serious face. "but Promise you will release mai soul with you so we can both live together in heaven right?". Jake laughed. "Of course Rene. I wouldnt dare to make your soul live forever in that shell." he then touched her nose playfully. Both of them smiled and the embraced again. -----------------------------------------
"Here it is..." Rayan (yes in Rayan mode now) said pointing to a large aboadened building. It had unlegible reading at the top. "This was the place where the Human Karma Project took place according to the Holy Knights Records." Kari, Mint, Kurai, Toadess, and Young Riku stood outside the building staring at the rubish everywhere. Riku made a disguisted face. "how in the world are we suppose to find anythign in this mess? i bet all the records all burned up by now." Kari leaned over and placed a hand on Riku's shoudler. "Young Riku theres no fault in leaving the possibility of finiding something in the hands of fate is there?" She smiled as if she was positive they would find something leading to The mysterious lady that looked like Rene. Kurai looking extremely bored yawned and chewed on a piece of wheat and then asked. "Remind me why im here again and why i care?" Toadess elbowed him and then held his ear. "DO you not care about Rene!? if that was Rene something bad could of happened to her! and its our duty as friends that we help her!" Kurai slapped Toadess hand away and then made another bored face. "Yeah but on Earth we had something better to do. It was called Jobs." Toadess ignored him and walked up to a broken fence and then stood on a pile of rubble and broken walls.
"Well come on Guys! what are we waiting for!" she yelled with her hands on her hips. Mint poitned below her mother and then said slowly. "umm mom i dunt think you should..." Toadess interupted her and then said "What!? you too chicken to come on top of some simple debris?" and then a sharp crack was heard and Toadess fell down a hole. She let out a pretty high scream and then all was heard was a flump. and then a bunch of dust floated above the whole. Everyone Sweatdropped. "Stop Laughing Kurai!" Toadess yelled out from the hole without looking. and indeed Kurai was laughing and pointing. Mint Sighed.
|
|
|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 19, 2004 22:42:28 GMT -5
--------------------------------- Rayan flipped a switch but nothing came on. "well i shouldnt be suprised the electircity would most likely be out bai now..." Kari flipped over varouis boxes hoping to find any useful records. Riku carried a flashlight labeled Stiger (his fathers company of course) . he looked about with Mint by his side (for shes scared of the dark) "Father how exactly do you expect to find anything in an entire company thats half destoryed?" He asked with a long sigh. Rayan didnt answer. Kurai just pulled out file cabinets ripping them apart but finidng no paper inside or anything important he tosses them behind him. "Nothing... Nothign....nothing..." Kurai said tossing each file cabinet behind him making loud clunking sounds. Toadess Yelled about almost getting hit by them "Kurry-Baby WaTch where your tossing that crap!" She said almost getting hit bai each one. Kurai annoyed by his pet name lifted up an entire file cabinet. Unfourtnatly it was sorta stuck on the wall due to uhh.. old age? (^^;; ) Kurai suprised he couldn't lift it up made a dissapointed sound and then put more power into lifting it. Toadess made a very nervous face and backed away. "uhhh ehhee... Kurai... what are you doing? with that large file cabinet??" Kurai didnt answer and made a large grunting sound Ripping off the wall along with the file cabinet. Revealing a tunnel leading downstairs behind it. "hmm well.." Kurai said suprised as he held the wall above him. He looked at the tunnel with awe before tossing the wall twoards Toadess. Toadess shrieked and punched it with her eflen gurl strength smashing it to rubbish. Toadess made an upset face. By that time it got everyones attention and everyone ran twoards the room Kurai and Toadess was in Looking at the secrete downstairs passage with awe. "hmm good going dad..." Mint said nodding her head. Kurai smirked and then looked at Toadess. "Couldn't have done it without Toadie. Which is excaclty i married her for..." Toadess didnt know weather to be honored or angered. Kari then looked at the ground of the tunnel. "... theres no dust really on these stairs" she said as she leaned down examining the stairs. Rayan worried about Kari yelled out. "kari! Don't do that youll get your dress dirty." he said waving his arms. Kari Rolled her eyes. Riku flashed his flashlight twoards the stairs and looked at it closely. "yeah... moms right.. thats quite odd.. i suggest we follow the path.. but with caution," he said reaching for the gun in his jacket. he Tied up his headband and adjusted his glasses. he then offerend to hold Mintts hand. But Mint refused. "you know i can take care of myself you know..." And just at that second the ceiling above crumbled almost hitting Mint with a few peices. Mint Shrieked and nuzzled against Rikus shoulder grabbing his arm. Riku smirked but blushed (due to his fathers gene again ). ---------------------------------------- "Everyone one of these computers are labeled perfectly.. and up to date.." Rayan said looking at each machine they pass by slowly. Kari walked slowly around stopping every few seconds examing the ground or walls. "... nothing leads to Rene's presence however though...". Riku pressed something at the top corner of his visor. "No signs of any life newhere at the second. im suprised about that. This seems to be the work of a company too. All the computers are on.. why would they leave it unattended then?". Mint still holding onto Rikus arm looked about worried. "Do you think Rene started some Ghost company or something?". Riku couldnt help but laugh. Kurai and Toadess on the other hand just stayed a lil behind just walking about. Toadess then said to break their silence. "You know we should really try to find a way to help...." She said suggesting. Kurai looked at Toadess from the corner of his eye not relaly careing. "... hey.. I ripped off that wall you know. Isnt that good enough?" Toadess sweatdropped. Suddenly Rayan found something interesting and called to them. "Guys.. check this out..." Everyone ran twoards a small cubicle sort of like room. inside it they all stared at it in awe. Inside was a sort of scientific poster of a gurls body bare. Kurai just sorta smirked and laughed at everyone and then said "Its a picture of a naked chick Big freakin deal. You guys never saw one yet? sheesh deprived Children you all are." Toadess smacked him fromt he backside and brought his face closer to the face of the gurl on the poster. "look closely Baka. Who do you see?" Toadess said holding his head firm. Kurai knocked away her hands and then studied it. Suddenly it hit him. "Whoa its Rene..." Looking at the face structure slowly. "hmm this graph is quite innacurrate. I mean..." Rayan interrupted in his Aoshi form as his eyes did that wierd switchy thing. flipping around. "this proves mai theroy.. thanks to mai soulmates intellect we were able to conclude that somone did use the HUman Karma Project technology to bring Rene's Soul back into a Robotic shell..." Everyone looked at each other in awe. Kurai Continued to stare at the poster. "man that must take a lot of reasearch..." Toadess whapped Kurai on the head with a nearby rolling chair and dragged him alway" --------------------------------------------- "Rene mai dear... do you reliaze what we could together with this technology?" Jake said who was now sitting on a small table across from Rene. He had a wine glass in his hand along with rene who was now dressed in a pretty lavish dress. Rene tilted her head curiosly. "No Jake.. I dunt know what could we do?". Jake cheered Rene (cheered? ). and then gave a small chuckle. "Rene mai Dear we could bring back incredible scientests! Famous Rock stars! and even dead presidents! all we need is a live devil or dark faerie that could smell out the soul." Jake excitidly clapped his hands and poured more wine in his cup. "we could make millions Rene!" Rene sorta froze at the sounds of "Devil and Soul." but then clapped along with Jake with excitment. " IM so happy Jake for you! this is so exciting!". Jake nodded and then leaned forward placing a hand underneathe Rene. "of course Millions means nothing if i dunt have you with me rene." Rene Blushed by those words and placed a hand on the hand Jake had on her face. Before the two could embrace again Jake jerked his head twoards the entrance of their lab and spotted the group of 6 who just entered. Aoshi stared down at Jake evily. ".... you. why is Rene alive here?" And he held up papers they found around the underground lab. "How dare you use technology for your own selfish desires! You threatened the life of Mint we saw it!" Jake smiled a little bit and then looked at Rene. "Rene do you recognize any of these people here?" Rene stood up placing her hands in front of her dress and glanced at each person. Kurai smirked. "Of course she will remmeber us Man. Her soul is inside that robotic shell right?" Kari nodded her head and so did Jake. Rene shut her eyes and then said quite softly. "No Jake. I Dun't know any of them. They are all strangers to me."
|
|
|
Post by RayanStiger on Apr 20, 2004 0:58:16 GMT -5
Wow...this is SUPA!!! I think I like this better than the other one so far!!! Heh heh...Rayan got hooked! Took him long enough...and yes that darn blushing gene WOULD be mine... My son's name is Riku! I like that! Man Alan I dunno where you come up with this stuff...Although the whole fused Aoshi/Rayan thing is kinda weird. But this is grade A, man... This may alter my planned plot for the other fan fic though...gar I can't decide whether to have it similar to this, or have them 'contradict'...any preference?
|
|
Aldora
Infantry
LadyDarkness
Where there is Light, there is Darkness. Darkness and Light are the two halves of one.
Posts: 105
|
Post by Aldora on Apr 20, 2004 23:34:07 GMT -5
Hehe me likes it! Come to think of it... Kari is more serious than Yvonne. I remember Yvonne flirting with Rayan on the first Ria... and I think the second too.
|
|
|
Post by FlamingMoogles on Apr 21, 2004 0:03:18 GMT -5
Kari and Kurai are so close.....im getting sooo confused! But good job...i skimmed it. Im lazy sry....its late...bare with me
|
|
|
Post by Taylor on Apr 21, 2004 16:57:59 GMT -5
i dont like being dead. I want to be able to be in my own body. Well if I was Rene.
|
|
|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 22, 2004 19:15:28 GMT -5
Kuro-Rene Chapter 3 By Alan
Kari eyes opened wide with suprisement. ".. what?" She then closed her eyes and held her head in a slight confusion. Aoshi's eyes also opened in suprisment. "......" his eyes seemed to glow with Rayan's and Aoshi's concern. Kurai stopped laughing and went. "Eh?" Jake looked at all of them and smirked.
"Oh you dunt remember Aoshi Rene?" he said holding her from behind and turning her head twoards Aoshi. Rene took a long look and then closed her eyes and said innocently. "No Jake. I dun't remember Aoshi at All." Kari opened her eyes again and then said in a quite fearful tone. "That.. is Rene's soul though... i can feel its aura and such. Can't you Kurai and Aoshi?" She said turning to both devils. Kurai sniffed the air and closed his eyes. "yes.. same sweet smell and that Earthen crust." He said as if it was food (XD ) Aoshi nodded as he sniffed the air too. Aoshi eyes turned angry again. "Jake... What did you do to Rene's soul?!?!". Kari also turned and glared at Jake. Kurai didn't get it though. "What? you mean he modified Rene's soul or something? is that possible?" Kurai held his head in half disbelivement and scared.
Jake laughed as he played with Rene's hair and Rene stood obediently with her hands still in front of her. "Yes belive it or not. I have modified Rene's soul." He then slipped a hand behind her neck. "But thats only for the betterment for our life." and then a clicking sound was heard as his hand pressed something behind her neck. Rene's body twitched and jerked forward a bit. "eh!" a sound from her voice was forced out. her eyes slowly turned from a natural reflection to a slight glowing pool of yellow. her hands fell to her sides as she had her head hung. it then went into an imitation of Jake. Jake smiled as he placed a strange mechinacal headband around his head. he then slowly turned to Kurai. Rene's head did the same. he pointed at Kurai. And so did Rene. "Do you see how it is now Kurai?" He said with a chuckle. "You killed Rene Kurai... Before we could get married..." a slight tear trickled down his cheek. Rene didnt cry but kept her position imatating Jake without any protest her eyes didnt blink and her expression was blank. "Now... im forced to marry a robot! Imagine the embarresment from mai co-workers and such! they thought it was crazy saying i couldn't revive Rene with technology." He said closing his eyes slowly. "But i did it.. i found a way to revive human souls into Robotic shells with the Human Karma project..." He gripped his hands. So did rene.
"Then they made me stop. They said i was playing God... they said it was wrong. SO they all aboadened me..." He started to sniffle and more tears came down as his hand quivered. Kari gulped. Slowly Jake closed his eyes. "did that stop me??" He said softly. " No... cause i loved Rene..." his voice quivered with each word as he tremebeled. "NO. cause i LOVED Rene!!" He said getting louder. "see what you brought to me Kurai?" He said slowly. "YOu brought me... Pain..... and for this.. I WILL KILL your OWN daughter! YOull see how it is loosing a loved one Kurai..." He then opened his eyes they were reflecting with tears and filled with anger. "... Kill MINT Rene..." And he opened his hand. Rene did too but with a green plasma ball charging in it. It turned to Mint.
"together Rene.. we will kill Mint.. and Avenge your own death..." He said looking at Mint with possed Eyes. The blast fired directly at Mint. Mint screamed but held both hands outwards. unfourtnatly she knew nothing of Deflection (shes a freakin human dudes!! ) So Riku rushed in front and held an energy shield labeled Stiger Co. . it blocked off the blast but it instantly broke at the touch. "damn promotional Shields..." Riku said smirked tossing it to the side. "i take it we can start kicking butt right Dad and Mom?" Aoshi nodded drawing his sword out. "Forgive me Rene. It seems we must destory this shell that controls you...". Kari held two hands in front of her chest and 5 multiple spirits appeared around her. she stayed there. Riku smiled as this were just a big game and reloaded his gun. he then rushed sideways around the path his father leaped forward too.
Kurai however stood escactlly where he was. Which was unnatural for Kurai's Usually active behavoir. "... Killing Rene? me?" He said softly. Toadess seeing this looked at Kurai concernly. "Kurry? whats the matter hon?"
Aoshi leaped in the air throwing the blade behind his back and fell twoards Rene rapidly increasing speed. Rene just looked up at Aoshi expresionalist. Aoshi ignored the fact she saw him and swung his blade down twoards Rene's Head. Rene swung with her back facing Aoshi. Aoshi Confusion at that movement broke his concentration of holding the blade down. This allowed Rene's leg swung from the side of aoshi and knock out his blade. She then leaped into the air and swung her other leg from the same side into Aoshi's face. Aoshi's blade was thrown away from Rene along with Aoshi. Toppling onto the ground the dirty lab floor kicked up some dust and Aoshi slid into a wall with a solid whump. he groaned holding his side in where the kick impacted into. Rene landed swiftly kneeling down with one hand supporting her fall. Jake smiled as he was in the same position Rene was in. Mint noticed it and then whispered under her breath, "Is he controlling her with his own movements?" Suddenly gunshots fired and Rene's Body jerked to different sides.
Rene turned to where the gunfires originated. She saw Riku Slamming his guns. "What the heck out of bullets already!?" He said yelling. suddenly his sunglasses started to beep. Riku Turning forward saw Rene rushing twoards him at high speed. Riku dropped his gun from shock and started to quiver in fear and braced for impact. Once Rene was close enough she slid on one foot realeasing her other foot for a very fast and heavy impact Kick onto Riku's chin. It went correclty twoards the area but once she threw her leg into his chin. It went right through. Jake relizing this said in shock. "holograms..." and just as that Riku dissepeared the real Riku appeared from behind some computers nearby and shoot two guns rappidly at Rene. ARene then quickly threw her hands in the air. Apparently her hands had some bullet proof armor installed on her wrists. She quickly knocked away some of them but a few hitting her forced her body to jerk back. Jake screamed angrily. "Noo.. Mai poor Rene soft skin! Im sorry dear!" He said with concern. "but dont worry Rene dear this is all for the better of our relationship!" and then Rene skidded backwards Firing another green plasma from her palm. It burned right through the bullets and hit Riku square in the chest. Riku flew backwards ramming into some large computers knocking them down. Riku groaned as his chest armor sizzled. "aww man NOt AGAIN!" He yelled slamming a fist on the ground squezzing his eyes shut from the pain.
Jake then curiously looked at Kurai. "hmm Kurai? why aren't you fighting? You should be used to killiing Rene right?" he stared down at him. "You know if you dunt fight i will kill Mint much more easily.." He said looking at Mint who jerked back holding her hands together. Kurai hearing this jerked his head up with anger. "How dare you accuse me of killing Rene Jake! don't you know that i was hurt too when she died?! She was a friend to me and we shared times too!" Kurai then looked at Jake with anger. "And what do you do!? you erase all the times she had with me together and just replaced it with some killing attitude or something!? you are SICK Jake! not only your abusing gifts from god but your turning them into killing machines!"
Jake expression went cold. Then Kari walked up to Jake face to face. Everyone sorta gasped. Jake just stared at Kari. she then took his hand. Everyone gasped again. Jake opened his mouth about to protest but Kari's expression of seriousness stopped him. " I read your past memories in this room Jake." She said refering to some of the spirits of the room floated above her in forms of white balls. "And i can see the cause of your anger Jake and you are indeed fighting for what you should be. Love or Justice. Love seems to be driving you plenty.. but i must tell you Jake. Stop. This will lead to a serious downfall in your relationship with Rene. Realize that Rene would never do anything like this. So why should you create such a horrible image for your loved one Jake?" (omg.. this was porbably the most worst crap i just typed up right now... )
Jake silently forced his hand out of Kari's and looked at Rene slowly. Rene turned her head to Jake expresionalist. Jake sighed and then said softly. "Your right Kari. I have created something that Rene would never be." Kari slowly smiled and everyone else just awed at Kari's convincing stragidies. suddenly Jake began to Cry. Kari started to soothe him by patting his back but Jake threw her hand off and slowly his cry became a laughfter. and then an uncontrollable laughter. and then his body started to twitch and his laughter went insane. "BUt I went too far to back away now Kari!!" And Kari drew out her sword. "then if thats your path Jake im afraid ill have to. ACK!" Kari's body flew off the platform that started to raise with Jake on it. Kari's body toppled over the rail and started to fall. Jake had just delivered a punch to the offguard Kari. Aoshi notcing it Leaped from his cracked wall and caught Kari as she fell. Unfourtantly as he landed his rib cracked more and Aoshi fell to the side in pain. Kari quickly went to her natural healing mode.
|
|
Aldora
Infantry
LadyDarkness
Where there is Light, there is Darkness. Darkness and Light are the two halves of one.
Posts: 105
|
Post by Aldora on Apr 23, 2004 18:26:25 GMT -5
Aww poor Aoshi!
|
|
|
Post by KuraiGekkou on Apr 24, 2004 15:39:37 GMT -5
btw thats only half of chapter 3 Alan's going to be taking a break for 3 days now cause.. i ran out of ideas for one thing and im just.... tired..... x.x;;; zzzzzzzz
and to answer your question Rayan. I dunt care what you change. I mean this dosent follow any of the Fyia guidelines real well cause its a FANFIC. anything can happen in their. Heck i could make mattus gay if i wanted!
......
hmmmmmmmm.. XP....
|
|
|
Post by FlamingMoogles on Apr 24, 2004 17:42:48 GMT -5
dont forget that i know where you live...
|
|