One Stanza - Depression

Harle
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One Stanza - Depression Jul 21, 2005 1:50:25 GMT -5

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Post by Harle on Jul 21, 2005 1:50:25 GMT -5

Very simple... but for some reason, I could only manage one stanza. Hmm.. if I end up feeling down again, I may finish this. XD Gah... still, read my story! In the other topic! >_<

Incomplete Depression

My facade is set, with neglectful eyes
My hands grow scant, forgetting their ties
The blind is bound, and as a vagrant I go,
My burdens are small, but destined to grow

"Wan lips of baby roses
Blood of the iron angel
Hands painted in obsidian leather
The raven has sprouted new feathers

Shivering in the desolate night
Children suffer from continuous plight
The virgin lost in adulterated lust
The raven flies high above the city"- Excerpt from a poem by moi. ^_^

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One Stanza - Depression Jul 25, 2005 21:16:58 GMT -5

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Post by RayanStiger on Jul 25, 2005 21:16:58 GMT -5

@-@ errrrrr... I'd compliment you on it, but I don't quite understand your poems... sorry... Your style is beyond my grasp.

But that also means I don't think they're bad, either. I guess I'd have to see a finished product before I could piece it together in my head, like the one on your signature that I already commented on to you.

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Harle Elite Warrior No human can be the epitome of any certain quality... whether it be innocence, evil, etc. Posts: 870	One Stanza - Depression Jul 26, 2005 0:08:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Harle on Jul 26, 2005 0:08:10 GMT -5 Oh, lol. Sorry about that. ^_^ Hmm... I'll try posting one of my finished pieces.
	"Wan lips of baby roses Blood of the iron angel Hands painted in obsidian leather The raven has sprouted new feathers Shivering in the desolate night Children suffer from continuous plight The virgin lost in adulterated lust The raven flies high above the city"- Excerpt from a poem by moi. ^_^

One Stanza - Depression

Post by Harle on Jul 21, 2005 1:50:25 GMT -5

Post by RayanStiger on Jul 25, 2005 21:16:58 GMT -5

Post by Harle on Jul 26, 2005 0:08:10 GMT -5