DoubleX
Warrior
Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
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Post by DoubleX on Jan 3, 2004 15:14:47 GMT -5
Alexander looked up in the sky as he buttoned up his dark brown sherpa trench coat. He re-adjusted his gear and looked down upon the incredible city below him, wondering what the hell brought him here...Oh yeah, a job. He was looking for a job. He pulled a pair of snow-goggles over his head and continued onward...
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Post by Gen on Jan 3, 2004 19:45:16 GMT -5
A lone giggle echoed off of the nearly deserted mountains and the blissful sound was intensified as it recoiled through the air. The noise flowed from the gentle lips of the mage Kathryn as she stumbled happily through the ankle-deep snow, a lightweight backpack slung over her right shoulder and her blonde locks pulled up into a sloppy half-braid. She was on her way to seeing her love DarkUmbra, for a celebration of their anniversary. It had been six months already since their first meeting.
But it seems more like forever . . . like this is something that has always been.
And always will be.
She giggled again as she danced with the fanciful shadows in her mind as she walked along the path towards his house. She couldn’t remember when she had ever been in such a good mood before the night six months ago. Perhaps never. But that didn’t matter anymore.
No more dwelling on the past. No more hating myself for things that I can’t control. Haha. And no more little talks with yourself!
Once more a giggle escaped her lips and as she neared his abode, a thought drifted to her from somewhere else.
Oh yeah, a job.
She paused for a second and then reached out to figure out who it was that she was hearing from.
Man. On your right.
She turned slightly and then cautiously called out, "Hello?"
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DoubleX
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Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
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Post by DoubleX on Jan 3, 2004 21:53:23 GMT -5
Alexander looked down on the girl and moved the snow goggles onto his forehead. "Who might you be?" As he finished speaking, he discreetly switched the safety off on his M4...
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Post by Gen on Jan 4, 2004 0:16:38 GMT -5
Kathryn smiled up at the stranger as he moved into her field of vision. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, pulling it securely up onto her shoulder and then stuck out her hand in greeting. "My name's Kathryn. I pose no threat, I assure you," she flashed a soft smile at him which she knew was a surefire way to let people know that she was speaking the truth and continued. "I am a native of these parts. Perhaps I can help you find whatever it is that you're looking for?"
She eyed his goggles and continued, "Or are you just out for a solitary day of snowshoing . . .," her eyes darted to his feel and back up to his eyes. Her smile remained soft and calming, "in your boots?"
Danger. Be weary . . .
She shifted her weight onto her other foot, keeping her eye contact steady and hand extended. She made sure to keep her look gentle, for she would much rather have another friend than a new enemy.
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DoubleX
Warrior
Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
Posts: 335
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Post by DoubleX on Jan 4, 2004 0:54:11 GMT -5
He ignored her hand and switched the safety back on. "I'm looking for a job, if you know what I mean. You interested?"
((OOC - Forgive his rudeness, he doesn't take kindly to new people very easily. By the way, if your not familiar, "OOC" means "Out Of Character." So when I want to say something, I'll say it in double parenthases and an "OOC" ))
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Vash
Newbie
I'M VASH THE STAMPEDE
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Post by Vash on Feb 28, 2004 13:37:02 GMT -5
Vash noticing that a man In a trench coat was walking around asking people for a job. Vash came up to the man and asked," What is your name? and do you want a job?"
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DoubleX
Warrior
Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
Posts: 335
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Post by DoubleX on Feb 29, 2004 22:36:32 GMT -5
My name is of no importance. I deal in destruction. need someone oit of the way? Need a building gone? Want a country to call your own? I'm the man to call, I'll do anything for the right price.
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Post by BokunetSuMaro on Sept 2, 2004 18:33:49 GMT -5
((wow if someone were to try and make a post longer then Double X's and Vash's all they would have to do it type a five line post. All of Gen's posts are like 3-6 times as long as both of theirs and like 3 times as long as all of theirs combined. i bet that this right here is longer then anyone of theirs))
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DoubleX
Warrior
Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
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Post by DoubleX on Sept 3, 2004 16:07:16 GMT -5
I think it's a fine time to tell you that you are late. I have improved much upon my role playing skills since this dead ol' post was started(by me). Anyways, extra-long posts are annoying, it makes the thread more interesting but whence you pass the comfortable limit it just becomes annoying to read such loooong draaaawn oooout poooosts...
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Post by BokunetSuMaro on Sept 3, 2004 16:40:22 GMT -5
no it doesn't it makes the thread much better just look at the war thread we have and think about if you took all the good descriptive a parts of it out and just left it like all of your short and sencless posts what it would be like. It would be nothin to what it is now with all the kisckars RPers on it like DP Gai Mitsuko and the others that i cannot remember, then look at the post that you are putting there they are probly as long as what i am saying now and not to muntion pointless. Here is one of your posts on the war thread;
"James dove out of the door and rolled down the hill. He turned around and saw several anti-air misile batteries fire missiles at the falling airship. Roughly 20 missiles slammed into the falling hull, sending debris everywhere and shattering the glass of upper floors on several buildings.
James scrambled over the lip of the opening and joned the ranks of D and Boku."
and here is my reprodution of the very same one tell me which is better;
"James dove out the door just barly dodging enemy lasers that hissed through the air and smashed into the wall behind him as he rolled down the battle cratored hill. He turned just in time to see several of the anti-air missile batteries fire the deadly acurate projectiles at one of the severly damaged enemy airships. What looked like a hundred missiles smashed into the already damaged hull of the airship causing a massive explosing that sent hundreds of smaller peices in all directions, as the shockwave blew the windows of the upper floors to peices.
James darted up the rocky lip of the cave that Boku and D had garaseneed ((i cannot spell)) and walked up beside them. Behind him more of the shurnon fleet flew strait towards them. James looked at D and as if asking them what he needed to do."
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DoubleX
Warrior
Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
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Post by DoubleX on Sept 4, 2004 0:28:18 GMT -5
If you thought your argument through, you would have realized that any post that is on subject has a point. Therefore, when you called my short posts pointless you were very wrong.
Unless you're willing to provide me a link that says otherwise, you misquoted my post. I know how to spell 'garrisoned' and if I don't, then that is pretty damn close. There are also several other parts that were never typed by me.
And I would also like to know why the hell you decided to release a salvo of insults in an old thread made up of old posts done in the past before I improved. Did someone in your family die? Learn to deal with your problems inside your mind, not unnecessarily on a forum where a friendly atmosphere is desirable.
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Post by BokunetSuMaro on Sept 5, 2004 18:04:03 GMT -5
no noone died but sometimes i wish i would dont you
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DoubleX
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Charlie Foxtrot
First I giveth, then I taketh away...
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Post by DoubleX on Sept 6, 2004 2:33:09 GMT -5
No, I wouldn't say that...anyways, there's nothing wrong with paragraph-or-two posts but I was mainly talking about paragraphs that take up nearly 5 of those type of posts.
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